Thread: Some creative writing, comments please.
There are just one or two places that I would like a bit more detail, to heighten the suspense even more.
I was confused. Screams and sudden movements surrounded me. I was thrown to the marble floor just as the deathly chill began to set in.
Be careful with phrases like:"tendrils of fear" and "paralyzed by terror", they can sound cliche.
I am very interested to read some more. I hope there is some?
Great to have you back, by the way!