
Thread: Tolkien's Poetry, Serialized
[1] [2] [3] >>Hey! These are great! ROFL! Are there more? 

Yes, I'll probably finish this one tomorrow and start another one about your namesake early next week.
It will probably be 'Bombadil Goes Boating' which is more than twice as long and contains a few stanzas in which Tom visits Farmer Maggot--for his mushrooms and brew I presume.
It will probably be 'Bombadil Goes Boating' which is more than twice as long and contains a few stanzas in which Tom visits Farmer Maggot--for his mushrooms and brew I presume.

Cool! I'll be waiting! 



And now another poem about the fellow
with jacket blue and boots of yellow.
Bombadil Goes Boating
by JRR Tolkien © JRR Tolkien and taken from The Adventures of Tom Bombadil © George Allen & Unwin Ltd., found in Ninth Edition of The Tolkien Reader © Ballantine Books, Inc.
[Edited on 25/4/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 26/4/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 27/4/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 28/4/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 28/4/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 30/4/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 1/5/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 2/5/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 17/10/2002 by Grondmaster]
with jacket blue and boots of yellow.
Bombadil Goes Boating
by JRR Tolkien © JRR Tolkien and taken from The Adventures of Tom Bombadil © George Allen & Unwin Ltd., found in Ninth Edition of The Tolkien Reader © Ballantine Books, Inc.
Quote:
The old year was turning brown; the West Wind was calling;
Tom caught a beechen leaf in the Forest falling.
'I've caught a happy day blown me by the breezes!
Why wait till morrow-year? I'll take it when me pleases.
This day I'll mend my boat and journey as it chances
west down the withy-stream, following my fancies!'
Little Bird sat on twig, 'Whillo, Tom! I heed you.
I've a guess, I've a guess where your fancies lead you.
Shall I go, shall I go, bring him word to meet you?'
'No names, you tell-tale, or I'll skin and eat you,
babbling in every ear things that don't concern you.
If you tell Willow-man where I've gone, I'll burn you,
roast you on a willow-spit. That'll end your prying!'
Willow-wren cocked her tail, piped as she went flying:
'Catch me first, catch me first! No names are needed.
I'll perch on his hither ear: the postBody will be heeded.
"Down by Mithe", I'll say, "just as the sun is sinking,"
Hurry up, hurry up! That's the time for drinking!'
Tom laughed to himself: 'Maybe then I'll go there.
I might go by other ways, but today I'll row there.'
He shaved oars, patched his boat; from hidden creek he hauled her
through reed and sallow-brake, under leaning alder,
then down the river went, singing: 'Silly-sallow,
Flow withy-willow stream over deep and shallow!'
'Whee! Tom Bombadil! Whither be you going,
bobbing in a cockle-boat, down the river rowing?'
'Maybe to Brandywine along the Withywindle;
maybe friends of mine fire for me will kindle
down by the Hays-end. Little folk I know there,
kind at the day's end. Now and then I go there'.
'Take word to my kin, bring me back their postThreadIDings!
Tell me of diving pools and the fishes' hidings!'
'Nay then', said Bombadil, 'I am only rowing
just to smell the water like, not on errands going'.
'Tee hee Cocky Tom! Mind your tub don't founder!
Look out for willow-snags! I'd laugh to see you flounder'.
'Talk less, Fisher Blue! Keep your kindly wishes!
Fly off and preen yourself with the bones of fishes!
Gay lord on your bough, at home a dirty varlet
living in a sloven house, though your breast be scarlet.
I've heard of fisher-birds beak in air a-dangling
to show how the wind is set: that's an end of angling!'
The King's fisher shut his beak, winked his eye, as singing
Tom passed under bough. Flash! then he went winging;
dropped down jewel-blue a feather, and Tom caught it
gleaming in a sun-ray: a pretty gift he thought it.
He stuck it in his tall hat, the old feather casting:
'Blue now for Tom', he said, 'a merry hue and lasting!'
Rings swirled round his boat, he saw the bubbles quiver.
Tom slapped his oar, smack! at a shadow in the river.
'Hoosh! Tom Bombadil! 'Tis long since last I met you.
Turned water-boatman, eh? What if I upset you?'
'What? Why, Whisker-lad, I'd ride you down the river.
My fingers on your back would set your hide a-shiver.'
'Pish, Tom Bombadil! I'll go and tell my mother;
"Call all our kin to come, father, sister, brother!
Tom's gone mad as a coot with wooden legs: he's paddling
down Withywindle stream, an old tub a-straddling!"'
'I'll give your otter-fell to Barrow-wights. That'll taw you!
Then smother you in gold-rings! Your mother if she saw you,
she'd never know her son, unless 'twas by a whisker.
Nay, don't tease old Tom, until you be far brisker!'
'Whoosh! said otter-lad, river-water spraying
over Tom's hat and all; set the boat a-swaying,
dived down under it, and by the bank lay peering,
till Tom's merry song faded out of hearing.
Old Swan of Elvet-isle sailed past him proudly,
gave Tom a black look, snorted at him loudly.
Tom laughed: 'You old cob, do you miss your feather?
Give me a new one then! The old was warn by weather.
Could you speak a fair word, I would love you dearer:
long neck and dumb throat, but still a haughty sneerer!
If one day the King returns, in upping he may take you,
brand your yellow bill, and less lordly make you!'
Old swan huffed his wings, hissed, and paddled faster;
in his wake bobbing on Tom went rowing after.
Tom came to Withy-weir. Down the river rushing
foamed into Windle-reach, a-bubbling and a-splashing;
bore Tom over stone spinning like a windfall,
bobbing like a bottle-cork, to the hythe at Grindwall.
'Hoy! Here's Woodman Tom with his billy-beard on!'
laughed all the little folk of Hays-end and Breredon.
'Ware, Tom! We'll shoot you dead with our bows and arrows!
We don't let Forest-folk nor bogies from the Barrows
cross over Brandywine by cockle-boat nor ferry'.
'Fie, little fatbellies! Don't ye make so merry!
I've seen hobbit-folk digging holes to hide 'em,
frightened if a horny goat or a badger eyed 'em,
afeared of the moony-beams, their own shadows shunning.
I'll call the orks on you: that'll send you running!'
'You may call, Woodman Tom. And you can talk your beard off.
Three arrows in your hat! You we're not afeard of!
Where would you go to now? If for beer you're making,
the barrels aint deep enough in Breredon for your slaking!'
'Away over Brandywine by Shirebourn I'd be going,
but too swift for cockle-boat the river now is flowing.
I'd bless little folk that took me in their wherry,
wish them evenings fair and many mornings merry'.
Red flowed the Brandywine; with flame the river kindled,
as sun sank beyond the Shire, and then to grey it dwindled.
Mithe Steps empty stood. None was there to greet him.
Silent the Causeway lay. Said Tom: 'A merry meeting!
Tom stumped along the road, as the light was failing.
Rushy lamps gleamed ahead. He heard a voice him hailing.
'Whoa there!' Ponies stopped, wheels halted sliding.
Tom went plodding past, never looked beside him.
'Ho there! beggarman tramping in the Marish!
What's your business here? Hat all stuck with arrows!
Someone's warned you off, caught you at your sneaking?
Come here! Tell me now what it is you're seeking!
Shire-ale, I'll be bound, though you've not a penny.
I'll bid them lock their doors, and then you won't get any!'
'Well, well, Muddy-feet! From one that's late for meeting
away back by the Mithe that's a surly greeting!
You old farmer fat that cannot walk for wheezing,
cart-drawn like a sack, ought to be more pleasing.
Penny-wise tub-on-legs! A beggar can't be chooser,
or else I'd bid you go, and you would be the loser.
Come, Maggot! Help me up! A tankard now you owe me.
Even in cockshut light an old friend should know me!'
Laughing they drove away, in Rushey never halting,
though the inn open stood and they could smell the malting.
They turned down Maggot's Lane, rattling and bumping,
Tom in the farmer's cart dancing round and jumping.
Stars shone on Bamfurlong, and Maggot's house was lighted;
fire in the kitchen burned to welcome the benighted.
Maggot's sons bowed at the door, his daughters did their curtsy,
his wife brought tankards out for those that might be thirsty.
Songs they had and merry tales, the supping and the dancing;
Goodman Maggot there for all his belt was prancing,
Tom did a hornpipe when he was not quaffing,
daughters did the Springle-ring, goodwife did the laughing.
When others went to bed in hay, fern, or feather,
close in the inglenook they laid their heads together,
old Tom and Muddy-feet, swapping all the postThreadIDings
from Barrow-downs to Tower Hills: of walkings and of ridings;
of wheat-ear and barley-corn, of sowing and of reaping;
queer tales from Bree, and talk at smithy, mill, and cheaping;
rumours in whispering trees, south-wind in the larches,
tall Watchers by the Ford, Shadows on the marches.
Old Maggot slept at last in chair beside the embers.
Ere dawn Tom was gone: as dreams one half remembers,
some merry, some sad, and some of hidden warning.
None heard the door unlocked; a shower of rain at morning
his footprints washed away, at Mithe he left no traces,
at Hays-end they heard no song nor sound of heavy paces.
Continued in.... "Bombadil Goes Boating" available in The Tolkien Reader.
(And that's all I may do of this one. Stay tuned for an additional poem, coming to this forum in the near future.) The old year was turning brown; the West Wind was calling;
Tom caught a beechen leaf in the Forest falling.
'I've caught a happy day blown me by the breezes!
Why wait till morrow-year? I'll take it when me pleases.
This day I'll mend my boat and journey as it chances
west down the withy-stream, following my fancies!'
Little Bird sat on twig, 'Whillo, Tom! I heed you.
I've a guess, I've a guess where your fancies lead you.
Shall I go, shall I go, bring him word to meet you?'
'No names, you tell-tale, or I'll skin and eat you,
babbling in every ear things that don't concern you.
If you tell Willow-man where I've gone, I'll burn you,
roast you on a willow-spit. That'll end your prying!'
Willow-wren cocked her tail, piped as she went flying:
'Catch me first, catch me first! No names are needed.
I'll perch on his hither ear: the postBody will be heeded.
"Down by Mithe", I'll say, "just as the sun is sinking,"
Hurry up, hurry up! That's the time for drinking!'
Tom laughed to himself: 'Maybe then I'll go there.
I might go by other ways, but today I'll row there.'
He shaved oars, patched his boat; from hidden creek he hauled her
through reed and sallow-brake, under leaning alder,
then down the river went, singing: 'Silly-sallow,
Flow withy-willow stream over deep and shallow!'
'Whee! Tom Bombadil! Whither be you going,
bobbing in a cockle-boat, down the river rowing?'
'Maybe to Brandywine along the Withywindle;
maybe friends of mine fire for me will kindle
down by the Hays-end. Little folk I know there,
kind at the day's end. Now and then I go there'.
'Take word to my kin, bring me back their postThreadIDings!
Tell me of diving pools and the fishes' hidings!'
'Nay then', said Bombadil, 'I am only rowing
just to smell the water like, not on errands going'.
'Tee hee Cocky Tom! Mind your tub don't founder!
Look out for willow-snags! I'd laugh to see you flounder'.
'Talk less, Fisher Blue! Keep your kindly wishes!
Fly off and preen yourself with the bones of fishes!
Gay lord on your bough, at home a dirty varlet
living in a sloven house, though your breast be scarlet.
I've heard of fisher-birds beak in air a-dangling
to show how the wind is set: that's an end of angling!'
The King's fisher shut his beak, winked his eye, as singing
Tom passed under bough. Flash! then he went winging;
dropped down jewel-blue a feather, and Tom caught it
gleaming in a sun-ray: a pretty gift he thought it.
He stuck it in his tall hat, the old feather casting:
'Blue now for Tom', he said, 'a merry hue and lasting!'
Rings swirled round his boat, he saw the bubbles quiver.
Tom slapped his oar, smack! at a shadow in the river.
'Hoosh! Tom Bombadil! 'Tis long since last I met you.
Turned water-boatman, eh? What if I upset you?'
'What? Why, Whisker-lad, I'd ride you down the river.
My fingers on your back would set your hide a-shiver.'
'Pish, Tom Bombadil! I'll go and tell my mother;
"Call all our kin to come, father, sister, brother!
Tom's gone mad as a coot with wooden legs: he's paddling
down Withywindle stream, an old tub a-straddling!"'
'I'll give your otter-fell to Barrow-wights. That'll taw you!
Then smother you in gold-rings! Your mother if she saw you,
she'd never know her son, unless 'twas by a whisker.
Nay, don't tease old Tom, until you be far brisker!'
'Whoosh! said otter-lad, river-water spraying
over Tom's hat and all; set the boat a-swaying,
dived down under it, and by the bank lay peering,
till Tom's merry song faded out of hearing.
Old Swan of Elvet-isle sailed past him proudly,
gave Tom a black look, snorted at him loudly.
Tom laughed: 'You old cob, do you miss your feather?
Give me a new one then! The old was warn by weather.
Could you speak a fair word, I would love you dearer:
long neck and dumb throat, but still a haughty sneerer!
If one day the King returns, in upping he may take you,
brand your yellow bill, and less lordly make you!'
Old swan huffed his wings, hissed, and paddled faster;
in his wake bobbing on Tom went rowing after.
Tom came to Withy-weir. Down the river rushing
foamed into Windle-reach, a-bubbling and a-splashing;
bore Tom over stone spinning like a windfall,
bobbing like a bottle-cork, to the hythe at Grindwall.
'Hoy! Here's Woodman Tom with his billy-beard on!'
laughed all the little folk of Hays-end and Breredon.
'Ware, Tom! We'll shoot you dead with our bows and arrows!
We don't let Forest-folk nor bogies from the Barrows
cross over Brandywine by cockle-boat nor ferry'.
'Fie, little fatbellies! Don't ye make so merry!
I've seen hobbit-folk digging holes to hide 'em,
frightened if a horny goat or a badger eyed 'em,
afeared of the moony-beams, their own shadows shunning.
I'll call the orks on you: that'll send you running!'
'You may call, Woodman Tom. And you can talk your beard off.
Three arrows in your hat! You we're not afeard of!
Where would you go to now? If for beer you're making,
the barrels aint deep enough in Breredon for your slaking!'
'Away over Brandywine by Shirebourn I'd be going,
but too swift for cockle-boat the river now is flowing.
I'd bless little folk that took me in their wherry,
wish them evenings fair and many mornings merry'.
Red flowed the Brandywine; with flame the river kindled,
as sun sank beyond the Shire, and then to grey it dwindled.
Mithe Steps empty stood. None was there to greet him.
Silent the Causeway lay. Said Tom: 'A merry meeting!
Tom stumped along the road, as the light was failing.
Rushy lamps gleamed ahead. He heard a voice him hailing.
'Whoa there!' Ponies stopped, wheels halted sliding.
Tom went plodding past, never looked beside him.
'Ho there! beggarman tramping in the Marish!
What's your business here? Hat all stuck with arrows!
Someone's warned you off, caught you at your sneaking?
Come here! Tell me now what it is you're seeking!
Shire-ale, I'll be bound, though you've not a penny.
I'll bid them lock their doors, and then you won't get any!'
'Well, well, Muddy-feet! From one that's late for meeting
away back by the Mithe that's a surly greeting!
You old farmer fat that cannot walk for wheezing,
cart-drawn like a sack, ought to be more pleasing.
Penny-wise tub-on-legs! A beggar can't be chooser,
or else I'd bid you go, and you would be the loser.
Come, Maggot! Help me up! A tankard now you owe me.
Even in cockshut light an old friend should know me!'
Laughing they drove away, in Rushey never halting,
though the inn open stood and they could smell the malting.
They turned down Maggot's Lane, rattling and bumping,
Tom in the farmer's cart dancing round and jumping.
Stars shone on Bamfurlong, and Maggot's house was lighted;
fire in the kitchen burned to welcome the benighted.
Maggot's sons bowed at the door, his daughters did their curtsy,
his wife brought tankards out for those that might be thirsty.
Songs they had and merry tales, the supping and the dancing;
Goodman Maggot there for all his belt was prancing,
Tom did a hornpipe when he was not quaffing,
daughters did the Springle-ring, goodwife did the laughing.
When others went to bed in hay, fern, or feather,
close in the inglenook they laid their heads together,
old Tom and Muddy-feet, swapping all the postThreadIDings
from Barrow-downs to Tower Hills: of walkings and of ridings;
of wheat-ear and barley-corn, of sowing and of reaping;
queer tales from Bree, and talk at smithy, mill, and cheaping;
rumours in whispering trees, south-wind in the larches,
tall Watchers by the Ford, Shadows on the marches.
Old Maggot slept at last in chair beside the embers.
Ere dawn Tom was gone: as dreams one half remembers,
some merry, some sad, and some of hidden warning.
None heard the door unlocked; a shower of rain at morning
his footprints washed away, at Mithe he left no traces,
at Hays-end they heard no song nor sound of heavy paces.
Continued in.... "Bombadil Goes Boating" available in The Tolkien Reader.

[Edited on 25/4/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 26/4/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 27/4/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 28/4/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 28/4/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 30/4/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 1/5/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 2/5/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 17/10/2002 by Grondmaster]

Today I finished Bombadil Goes Boating. 


Never came to your head what a silly poem it actually is? All the ones about Bombadil are!!! :P :P :P Suppose it goes with the character!

What's on next? 

How about The Last Ship? would anyone like me to post the thirteen, eight line stanzas of that Tolkien poem?
Sure, why not?
If it's not too much trouble... 
If it's not too much trouble... 
The Last Ship
by JRR Tolkien © JRR Tolkien and taken from The Adventures of Tom Bombadil © George Allen & Unwin Ltd., found in Ninth Edition of The Tolkien Reader © Ballantine Books, Inc.

[Edited on 19/5/2002 by Grondmaster]
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[Edited on 17/10/2002 by Grondmaster]
by JRR Tolkien © JRR Tolkien and taken from The Adventures of Tom Bombadil © George Allen & Unwin Ltd., found in Ninth Edition of The Tolkien Reader © Ballantine Books, Inc.
Quote:
Fíriel looked out at three o'clock:
the grey night was going;
far away a golden cock
clear and shrill was crowing.
The trees were dark, and the dawn pale,
waking birds were cheeping,
a wind moved cool and frail
through dim leaves creeping.
She watched the gleam at window grow,
till the long light was shimmering
on land and leaf; on grass below
grey dew was glimmering.
Over the floor her white feet crept,
down the stair they twinkled,
through the grass they dancing stepped
all with dew besprinkled.
Her gown had jewels upon its hem,
as she ran down to the river,
and leaned upon a willow-stem,
and watched the water quiver.
A kingfisher plunged down like a stone
in a blue flash falling,
bending reeds were softly blown,
lily-leaves were sprawling.
A sudden music to her came,
as she stood there gleaming
with free hair in the morning's flame
on her shoulders streaming.
Flutes there were, and harps were wrung,
and there was sound of singing,
like wind-voices keen and young
and far bells ringing.
A ship with golden beak and oar
and timbers white came gliding;
swans went sailing on before,
her tall prow guiding.
Fair folk out of Elvenland
in silver-grey were rowing,
and three with crowns she saw there stand
with bright hair flowing.
With harp in hand they sang their song
to the slow oars swinging:
'Green is the land, the leaves are long,
and the birds are singing.
Many a day with dawn of gold
this earth will lighten,
many a flower will yet unfold,
ere the cornfields whiten.
'Then whither go ye, boatmen fair,
down the river gliding?
To twilight and to secret lair
in the great forest hiding?
To Northern isles and shores of stone
on strong swans flying,
by cold waves to dwell alone
with the white gulls crying?'
'Nay!' they answered. 'Far away
on the last road faring,
leaving western havens grey,
the seas of shadow daring,
we go back to Elvenhome,
where the White Tree is growing,
and the Star shines upon the foam
on the last shore flowing.
'To mortal fields say farewell,
Middle-earth forsaking!
In Elvenhome a clear bell
in the high tower is shaking.
Here grass fades and leaves fall,
and sun and moon wither,
and we have heard the far call
that bids us journey thither'.
The oars were stayed. They turned aside:
'Do you hear the call, Earth-maiden?
Firiel! Firiel!' they cried.
'Our ship is not full-laden.
One more only we may bear.
Come! For your days are speeding.
Come! Earth-maiden elven-fair,
our last call heeding.'
Firiel looked from the river-bank,
one step daring;
then deep in clay her feet sank,
and she halted staring.
Slowly the elven-ship went by
whispering through the water:
'I cannot come!' they heard her cry.
'I was born Earth's daughter!'
Continued in.... "The Last Ship" available in The Tolkien Reader.
(And that's all I may do of this one. Stay tuned for an additional poem, coming to this forum in the near future.) Fíriel looked out at three o'clock:
the grey night was going;
far away a golden cock
clear and shrill was crowing.
The trees were dark, and the dawn pale,
waking birds were cheeping,
a wind moved cool and frail
through dim leaves creeping.
She watched the gleam at window grow,
till the long light was shimmering
on land and leaf; on grass below
grey dew was glimmering.
Over the floor her white feet crept,
down the stair they twinkled,
through the grass they dancing stepped
all with dew besprinkled.
Her gown had jewels upon its hem,
as she ran down to the river,
and leaned upon a willow-stem,
and watched the water quiver.
A kingfisher plunged down like a stone
in a blue flash falling,
bending reeds were softly blown,
lily-leaves were sprawling.
A sudden music to her came,
as she stood there gleaming
with free hair in the morning's flame
on her shoulders streaming.
Flutes there were, and harps were wrung,
and there was sound of singing,
like wind-voices keen and young
and far bells ringing.
A ship with golden beak and oar
and timbers white came gliding;
swans went sailing on before,
her tall prow guiding.
Fair folk out of Elvenland
in silver-grey were rowing,
and three with crowns she saw there stand
with bright hair flowing.
With harp in hand they sang their song
to the slow oars swinging:
'Green is the land, the leaves are long,
and the birds are singing.
Many a day with dawn of gold
this earth will lighten,
many a flower will yet unfold,
ere the cornfields whiten.
'Then whither go ye, boatmen fair,
down the river gliding?
To twilight and to secret lair
in the great forest hiding?
To Northern isles and shores of stone
on strong swans flying,
by cold waves to dwell alone
with the white gulls crying?'
'Nay!' they answered. 'Far away
on the last road faring,
leaving western havens grey,
the seas of shadow daring,
we go back to Elvenhome,
where the White Tree is growing,
and the Star shines upon the foam
on the last shore flowing.
'To mortal fields say farewell,
Middle-earth forsaking!
In Elvenhome a clear bell
in the high tower is shaking.
Here grass fades and leaves fall,
and sun and moon wither,
and we have heard the far call
that bids us journey thither'.
The oars were stayed. They turned aside:
'Do you hear the call, Earth-maiden?
Firiel! Firiel!' they cried.
'Our ship is not full-laden.
One more only we may bear.
Come! For your days are speeding.
Come! Earth-maiden elven-fair,
our last call heeding.'
Firiel looked from the river-bank,
one step daring;
then deep in clay her feet sank,
and she halted staring.
Slowly the elven-ship went by
whispering through the water:
'I cannot come!' they heard her cry.
'I was born Earth's daughter!'
Continued in.... "The Last Ship" available in The Tolkien Reader.

[Edited on 19/5/2002 by Grondmaster]
[Edited on 19/5/2002 by Grondmaster]
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[Edited on 17/10/2002 by Grondmaster]
I finished adding the final sanzas to Tokien's The Last Ship today. 
Next time I may start The Man in the Moon Came Down Too Soon.

Next time I may start The Man in the Moon Came Down Too Soon.

Great job Grondy! Think I'll join you, Tommy.

I liked the Adventures of TB. When was that written Grondy, do you have that written anywhere? I haven't gone through the other two poems, so you might have written it there.
Way before the Hobbit? Or After?

I liked the Adventures of TB. When was that written Grondy, do you have that written anywhere? I haven't gone through the other two poems, so you might have written it there.
Way before the Hobbit? Or After?
The book was first published (copyrighted) in 1962; I have no idea as to when Tolkien actually wrote the individual poems.
Hey Golly! We got another reader here! 
Title sounds very promising Grondy, go for it!

Title sounds very promising Grondy, go for it!

The Man in the Moon Came Down Too Soon
by JRR Tolkien © JRR Tolkien and taken from The Adventures of Tom Bombadil © George Allen & Unwin Ltd., found in Ninth Edition of The Tolkien Reader © Ballantine Books, Inc.

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by JRR Tolkien © JRR Tolkien and taken from The Adventures of Tom Bombadil © George Allen & Unwin Ltd., found in Ninth Edition of The Tolkien Reader © Ballantine Books, Inc.
Quote:
The Man in the Moon had silver shoon,
and his beard was of silver thread;
With opals crowned and pearls all bound
about his girdlestead,
In his mantle grey he walked one day
across a shining floor.
And with a crystal key in secrecy
he opened an ivory door.
On a filigree stair of glimmering hair
then lightly down he went,
And merry was he at last to be free
on a mad adventure bent.
In diamonds white he had lost delight;
he was tired of his minaret
Of tall moonstone that towered alone
on a lunar mountain set.
He would dare any peril for ruby and beryl
to broider his pale attire,
For new diadems of lustrous gems,
emerald and sapphire.
He was lonely too with nothing to do
but stare at the world of gold
And heark to the hum that would distantly come
as gaily around it rolled.
At plenilune in his argent moon
in his heart he longed for Fire:
Not the limpid lights of wan selenites;
for red was his desire,
For crimson and rose and ember-glows,
for flame with burning tongue,
For the scarlet skies in a swift sunrise
when a stormy day is young.
He'd have seas of blues, and the living hues
of forest green and fen;
And he yearned for the mirth of the populous earth
and the sanguine blood of men.
He coveted song, and laughter long,
and viands hot, and wine,
Eating pearly cakes of light snowflakes
and drinking thin moonshine.
He twinkled his feet, as he thought of the meat,
of pepper, and punch galore;
And he tripped unaware on his slanting stair,
and like a meteor,
A star in flight, ere Yule one night
flickering down he fell
From his laddery path to a foaming bath
in the winding Bay of Bel.
He began to think, lest he melt and sink,
what in the moon to do,
When a fisherman's boat found him far afloat
to the amazement of the crew,
Caught in their net all shimmering wet
in a phosphorescent sheen
Of bluey whites and opal lights
and delicate liquid green.
Against his wish with the morning fish
they packed him back to land:
'You had best get a bed in an inn', they said;
'the town is near at hand'.
Only the knell of one slow bell
high in the Seaward Tower
Announced the news of his moonsick cruise
at that unseemly hour.
Not a hearth was laid, not a breakfast made,
and dawn was cold and damp.
There were ashes for fire, and for grass the mire,
for the sun was a smoking lamp
In a dim back-street. Not a man did he meet,
no voice was raised in song;
There were snores instead, for all folk were abed
and still would slumber long.
He knocked as he passed on doors locked fast,
and called and cried in vain,
Till he came to an inn that had light within,
and tapped at a window-pane.
A drowsy cook gave a surly look,
and 'What do you want?' said he.
'I want fire and gold and songs of old
and red wine flowing free!'
Continued in.... "The Man in the Moon Came Down Too Soon" available in The Tolkien Reader.
(And that's all I may do of this one. Stay tuned for an additional poem, coming to this forum in the near future.) The Man in the Moon had silver shoon,
and his beard was of silver thread;
With opals crowned and pearls all bound
about his girdlestead,
In his mantle grey he walked one day
across a shining floor.
And with a crystal key in secrecy
he opened an ivory door.
On a filigree stair of glimmering hair
then lightly down he went,
And merry was he at last to be free
on a mad adventure bent.
In diamonds white he had lost delight;
he was tired of his minaret
Of tall moonstone that towered alone
on a lunar mountain set.
He would dare any peril for ruby and beryl
to broider his pale attire,
For new diadems of lustrous gems,
emerald and sapphire.
He was lonely too with nothing to do
but stare at the world of gold
And heark to the hum that would distantly come
as gaily around it rolled.
At plenilune in his argent moon
in his heart he longed for Fire:
Not the limpid lights of wan selenites;
for red was his desire,
For crimson and rose and ember-glows,
for flame with burning tongue,
For the scarlet skies in a swift sunrise
when a stormy day is young.
He'd have seas of blues, and the living hues
of forest green and fen;
And he yearned for the mirth of the populous earth
and the sanguine blood of men.
He coveted song, and laughter long,
and viands hot, and wine,
Eating pearly cakes of light snowflakes
and drinking thin moonshine.
He twinkled his feet, as he thought of the meat,
of pepper, and punch galore;
And he tripped unaware on his slanting stair,
and like a meteor,
A star in flight, ere Yule one night
flickering down he fell
From his laddery path to a foaming bath
in the winding Bay of Bel.
He began to think, lest he melt and sink,
what in the moon to do,
When a fisherman's boat found him far afloat
to the amazement of the crew,
Caught in their net all shimmering wet
in a phosphorescent sheen
Of bluey whites and opal lights
and delicate liquid green.
Against his wish with the morning fish
they packed him back to land:
'You had best get a bed in an inn', they said;
'the town is near at hand'.
Only the knell of one slow bell
high in the Seaward Tower
Announced the news of his moonsick cruise
at that unseemly hour.
Not a hearth was laid, not a breakfast made,
and dawn was cold and damp.
There were ashes for fire, and for grass the mire,
for the sun was a smoking lamp
In a dim back-street. Not a man did he meet,
no voice was raised in song;
There were snores instead, for all folk were abed
and still would slumber long.
He knocked as he passed on doors locked fast,
and called and cried in vain,
Till he came to an inn that had light within,
and tapped at a window-pane.
A drowsy cook gave a surly look,
and 'What do you want?' said he.
'I want fire and gold and songs of old
and red wine flowing free!'
Continued in.... "The Man in the Moon Came Down Too Soon" available in The Tolkien Reader.

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Today I finished The Man in the Moon Stayed Up Too Late. 
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Today I finished Tolkien's poem The Man in the Moon Came Down Too Soon. 
I will have to think about what to do next.

I will have to think about what to do next.

Hi Tommy. Isn't this great?Thanks Grondy. How many poems are included in the AoTB?
Sixteen poems. I think the next one I'll do is Perry-the-Winkle. It has sixteen eight lined stanzus about a lonely troll and his quest for a friend.
I suppose I really should edit the first post of this thread and make a list of the poems I've done with the dates they have been started because when a group of poems are serialized in series one really needs a table of contents or an index to know how far to rewind the cassette.
I suppose I really should edit the first post of this thread and make a list of the poems I've done with the dates they have been started because when a group of poems are serialized in series one really needs a table of contents or an index to know how far to rewind the cassette.

Lonely troll, I like that! Appreciate it mate!
Yeah, a table of contents would be nice too.
Yeah, a table of contents would be nice too.
Okay, I added a Table of Contents to the first post of this thread. (Without tabs and double spaces, it was very hard to make any semblance of columns but as I used to say, "Its good enough for gummint work!")
Not going to start Perry-the-Winkle as today decided to play 'Summer' and it is still too hot to do any kind of meticulous typing and proof reading. First time it has gotten above 85 F this year, so today it decided that 96 F would be a nice high.
At 6 PM it was still 94 F and nary a cloud; however, a breeze has just started and the weather person has forecast some of our more typical cloudy June weather for tomorrow with an expected high of about 76 F. 
Not going to start Perry-the-Winkle as today decided to play 'Summer' and it is still too hot to do any kind of meticulous typing and proof reading. First time it has gotten above 85 F this year, so today it decided that 96 F would be a nice high.
At 6 PM it was still 94 F and nary a cloud; however, a breeze has just started and the weather person has forecast some of our more typical cloudy June weather for tomorrow with an expected high of about 76 F. 
That hot eh? Drink plenty of water then, wouldn't want you to get dehydrated mate.
Nice table btw.
Nice table btw.
Summertime! 
Nice table, Grondy, by the way. Well done!
Golly: hey there! Another reader!
Keep posting Grondy, doing great! 

Nice table, Grondy, by the way. Well done!
Golly: hey there! Another reader!
Keep posting Grondy, doing great! 
Perry-the-Winkle
by JRR Tolkien © JRR Tolkien and taken from The Adventures of Tom Bombadil © George Allen & Unwin Ltd., found in Ninth Edition of The Tolkien Reader © Ballantine Books, Inc.

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by JRR Tolkien © JRR Tolkien and taken from The Adventures of Tom Bombadil © George Allen & Unwin Ltd., found in Ninth Edition of The Tolkien Reader © Ballantine Books, Inc.
Quote:
The Lonely Troll he sat on a stone
and sang a mournful lay:
'O why, O why must I live on my own
in the hills of Faraway?
My folks are gone beyond recall
and take no thought of me;
alone I'm left, the last of all
from Weathertop to the Sea'.
'I steal no gold, I drink no beer,
I eat no kind of meat;
but People slam their doors in fear,
whenever they hear my feet.
O how I wish that they were neat,
and my hands were not so rough!
Yet my heart is soft, my smile is sweet,
and my cooking good enough.'
'Come, come!' he thought, 'this will not do!
I must go and find a friend;
a-walking soft I'll wander through
the Shire from end to end'.
Down he went, and he walked all night
with his feet in boots of fur;
to Delving he came in the morning light,
when folk were just astir.
He looked around, and who did he meet
but old Mrs. Bunce and all
with umbrella and basket walking the street;
and he smiled and stopped to call:
'Good morning, ma'am! Good day to you!
I hope I find you well?'
But she dropped umbrella and basket too,
and yelled a frightful yell.
Old Pott the Mayor was strolling near;
when he heard that awful sound,
he turned all purple and pink with fear,
and dived down underground.
The Lonely Troll was hurt and sad:
'Don't go!' he gently said,
but old Mrs. Bunce ran home like mad
and hid beneath her bed.
The Troll went on to the market-place
and peeped above the stalls;
the sheep went wild when they saw his face,
and the geese flew over the walls.
Old Farmer Hogg he spilled his ale,
Bill Butcher threw a knife,
and Grip his dog, he turned his tail
and ran to save his life.
The old Troll sadly sat and wept
outside the Lockholes gate,
and Perry-the-Winkle up he crept
and patted him on the pate.
'O why do you weep, you great big lump?
You're better outside than in!'
He gave the Troll a friendly thump,
and laughed to see him grin.
'O Perry-the-Winkle boy', he cried,
'come, you're the lad for me!
Now if you're willing to take a ride,
I'll carry you home to tea'.
He jumped on his back and held on tight,
and 'Off you go!' said he;
and Winkle had a feast that night,
and sat on the old Troll's knee.
There were pikelets, there was buttered toast,
and jam, and cream, and cake,
and the Winkle strove to eat the most,
though his buttons all should break.
The kettle sang, the fire was hot,
the pot was large and brown,
and the Winkle tried to drink the lot,
in tea though he should drown.
When full and tight were coat and skin,
they rested without speech,
till the old Troll said: 'I'll now begin
the bakers art to teach,
the making of beautiful cramsome bread,
of bannocks light and brown;
and then you can sleep on a heather-bed
with pillows of owlets' down'.
'Young Winkle, where've you been?' they said.
'I've been to a fulsome tea,
and I feel so fat, for I have fed
on cramsome bread', said he.
'But where, my lad, in the Shire was that?
Or out in Bree?' said they.
But Winkle he up and answered flat:
'I aint a-going to say'.
'But I know where', said Peeping Jack,
'I watched him ride away:
he went upon the old Troll's back
to the hills of Faraway'.
Then all the People went with a will,
by pony, cart, or moke,
until they came to a house in a hill
and saw a chimney smoke.
They hammered upon the old Troll's door.
'A beautiful cramsome cake
O bake for us, please, or two, or more;
O bake' they cried, 'O bake!'
'Go home, go home!' the old Troll said.
'I never invited you.
Only on Thursdays I bake my bread,
and only for a few'.
'Go home! Go home! There's some mistake.
My house is far too small;
and I've no pikelets, cream, or cake:
the Winkle has eaten all!
You Jack, and Hogg, old Bonce and Pott
I wish no more to see.
Be off! Be off now all the lot!
The Winkle's the boy for me!'
Continued in.... "Perry-the-Winkle" available in The Tolkien Reader.
(And that's all I may do of this one. Stay tuned for an additional poem, coming to this forum in the near future.) The Lonely Troll he sat on a stone
and sang a mournful lay:
'O why, O why must I live on my own
in the hills of Faraway?
My folks are gone beyond recall
and take no thought of me;
alone I'm left, the last of all
from Weathertop to the Sea'.
'I steal no gold, I drink no beer,
I eat no kind of meat;
but People slam their doors in fear,
whenever they hear my feet.
O how I wish that they were neat,
and my hands were not so rough!
Yet my heart is soft, my smile is sweet,
and my cooking good enough.'
'Come, come!' he thought, 'this will not do!
I must go and find a friend;
a-walking soft I'll wander through
the Shire from end to end'.
Down he went, and he walked all night
with his feet in boots of fur;
to Delving he came in the morning light,
when folk were just astir.
He looked around, and who did he meet
but old Mrs. Bunce and all
with umbrella and basket walking the street;
and he smiled and stopped to call:
'Good morning, ma'am! Good day to you!
I hope I find you well?'
But she dropped umbrella and basket too,
and yelled a frightful yell.
Old Pott the Mayor was strolling near;
when he heard that awful sound,
he turned all purple and pink with fear,
and dived down underground.
The Lonely Troll was hurt and sad:
'Don't go!' he gently said,
but old Mrs. Bunce ran home like mad
and hid beneath her bed.
The Troll went on to the market-place
and peeped above the stalls;
the sheep went wild when they saw his face,
and the geese flew over the walls.
Old Farmer Hogg he spilled his ale,
Bill Butcher threw a knife,
and Grip his dog, he turned his tail
and ran to save his life.
The old Troll sadly sat and wept
outside the Lockholes gate,
and Perry-the-Winkle up he crept
and patted him on the pate.
'O why do you weep, you great big lump?
You're better outside than in!'
He gave the Troll a friendly thump,
and laughed to see him grin.
'O Perry-the-Winkle boy', he cried,
'come, you're the lad for me!
Now if you're willing to take a ride,
I'll carry you home to tea'.
He jumped on his back and held on tight,
and 'Off you go!' said he;
and Winkle had a feast that night,
and sat on the old Troll's knee.
There were pikelets, there was buttered toast,
and jam, and cream, and cake,
and the Winkle strove to eat the most,
though his buttons all should break.
The kettle sang, the fire was hot,
the pot was large and brown,
and the Winkle tried to drink the lot,
in tea though he should drown.
When full and tight were coat and skin,
they rested without speech,
till the old Troll said: 'I'll now begin
the bakers art to teach,
the making of beautiful cramsome bread,
of bannocks light and brown;
and then you can sleep on a heather-bed
with pillows of owlets' down'.
'Young Winkle, where've you been?' they said.
'I've been to a fulsome tea,
and I feel so fat, for I have fed
on cramsome bread', said he.
'But where, my lad, in the Shire was that?
Or out in Bree?' said they.
But Winkle he up and answered flat:
'I aint a-going to say'.
'But I know where', said Peeping Jack,
'I watched him ride away:
he went upon the old Troll's back
to the hills of Faraway'.
Then all the People went with a will,
by pony, cart, or moke,
until they came to a house in a hill
and saw a chimney smoke.
They hammered upon the old Troll's door.
'A beautiful cramsome cake
O bake for us, please, or two, or more;
O bake' they cried, 'O bake!'
'Go home, go home!' the old Troll said.
'I never invited you.
Only on Thursdays I bake my bread,
and only for a few'.
'Go home! Go home! There's some mistake.
My house is far too small;
and I've no pikelets, cream, or cake:
the Winkle has eaten all!
You Jack, and Hogg, old Bonce and Pott
I wish no more to see.
Be off! Be off now all the lot!
The Winkle's the boy for me!'
Continued in.... "Perry-the-Winkle" available in The Tolkien Reader.

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Hi back Tommy! Yup, great thread, this!
Boo hoo! Poor troll.
Boo hoo! Poor troll.

Why has no one else discovered this yet? Strange...
How
that is... 
How
that is... 
I like the Man in the Moon one a lot. 
Tommy, I think others have been around and reading, just not saying much...that's what I've been doing, at least.

Tommy, I think others have been around and reading, just not saying much...that's what I've been doing, at least.
I added two more stanzas to Perry-the-Winkle today. 
Cheer up ladies, next time we get to more happier times.

Cheer up ladies, next time we get to more happier times.

You know, it's cases like this that break my heart. Poor troll. *sniff*
Reminds of these cry-films I used to watch. *boohoo*

I know, sad isn't it?
*joins Tommy*
Boohooo!
*joins Tommy*
Boohooo!

Waaaah! It's even sadder! 
poor troll...*sniffle sniffle*




Getting better? Getting worse, I'd say.

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Yay! Three cheers for Perry-the-Winkle! Perry for President!
Hang on...you're not going to add a sad twist to the tale after this are you G? The troll eats Perry, then gets burned to death by an angry mob or something? Because that's how these tales usally end right? There's usually no happy endings for trolls...it's a conspiracy isn't it?

Just so you all know I have added a section under J.R.R. Tolkien called Poems where you can now find all of Grondy's hard work shared for those who don't bother to visit our cool forum.

Yay! A happy ending! Can it be?

I added the finial two stanzas to Perry-the-Winkle today. 
Now I'll have to think about what to do next.

Now I'll have to think about what to do next.

Now I'm curious how this is going to end. 

What a lovely happy ending! Thanks Grondy!!!!! It made my my day. 
What other poems do you have then?

What other poems do you have then?
Thanks Ungoliant. 
Even though it appears in FOTR, I think I will next do The Man in the Moon Stayed Up Too Late as a lot of people have said they skipped over all the poetry in order to get on with the story. Bilbo's antics at the end of the poem, which he sang to the patrons of The Prancing Pony, caused Strider to quietly declare something like, "Well Mr. Baggins, you seem to have put your foot, or should I say, finger in it."
I have always had a soft spot for that poem, probably because Tolkien took the old nursery rhyme, Heigh-Diddle-Diddle and fleshed it out with many verses and turned it into a comic song.
What great sport! What! 

Even though it appears in FOTR, I think I will next do The Man in the Moon Stayed Up Too Late as a lot of people have said they skipped over all the poetry in order to get on with the story. Bilbo's antics at the end of the poem, which he sang to the patrons of The Prancing Pony, caused Strider to quietly declare something like, "Well Mr. Baggins, you seem to have put your foot, or should I say, finger in it."

I have always had a soft spot for that poem, probably because Tolkien took the old nursery rhyme, Heigh-Diddle-Diddle and fleshed it out with many verses and turned it into a comic song.
What great sport! What! 
Great ending, yeah! 
Good idea, Grondy! I too like that poem!

Good idea, Grondy! I too like that poem!

The Riddle in Faramir's Dream
by JRR Tolkien © JRR Tolkien and taken from The Lord of the Rings © George Allen & Unwin Ltd.

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by JRR Tolkien © JRR Tolkien and taken from The Lord of the Rings © George Allen & Unwin Ltd.
Quote:
Seek for the Sword that was Broken:
In Imladris it dwells;
There shall be counsels taken
Stronger than Morgul-spells.
There shall be shown a token
That Doom is near at hand,
Continued in.... "The Riddle in Faramir's Dream" available untitled in The Fellowship of the Ring.
(And that's all I may do of this one, which was requested by Tuesday. Stay tuned for an additional poem, coming to this forum in the near future.) Seek for the Sword that was Broken:
In Imladris it dwells;
There shall be counsels taken
Stronger than Morgul-spells.
There shall be shown a token
That Doom is near at hand,
Continued in.... "The Riddle in Faramir's Dream" available untitled in The Fellowship of the Ring.

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Ah, nice one Grondy! Good request, tuesday!
btw do you have the full version of the Elbereth song (from 'Three Is Company', Chapter III, Book 1)? Or is the book version the complete one as we know it?
Roll on the Man on the Moon!
Er...I meant Man in the Moon. Ooops. 

Liked that dream one too, yeah. Stay tuned folks, Man in the moon (
) is coming up, I think. Go Grondy! 
) is coming up, I think. Go Grondy! 
Quote:
btw do you have the full version of the Elbereth song (from 'Three Is Company', Chapter III, Book 1)? Or is the book version the complete one as we know it?
No the only bits to the O Elbereth song I know of, are Bilbo's translation as heard by him in 'Three Is Company'; the untranslated verse at the end of 'Many Meetings', Chapter 1, Book II; and finally the untranslated verse near the beginning of 'The Choices of Master Samwise', Chapter 10 of Book IV. The bits found near the end of 'The Grey Havens', Chapter 9, Book VI, are an amalgam of a couple of the previous ones.btw do you have the full version of the Elbereth song (from 'Three Is Company', Chapter III, Book 1)? Or is the book version the complete one as we know it?
That's ok then. Thanks for checking! 



