A poem by me

ellacriss
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A poem by me

Post#1 » Thu Mar 18, 2004 6:32 pm

ARagorn had feeling in his heart
luthien and arwen had stolen his part
luthien he could not have
she promised herself to Beren's half
arwen was being sent away
with the elves she son would stay
aragorn was lonely as you can see
he felt as though he would never be free
all he would be left to do
is sit in the darkness feeling blue
he could go and fight with all his friends
Gimli, Fodo; they have no ends
they're on a quest to rid the ring
to end their greed and all their sins
to rid the wars the thoughts the dreams
so they will always see sunbeams
with that golden ring gone they wont go crazy
their days will no longer be dark and hazy
to live their life in a normal way
is a wonderful feeling to feel all day

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rednell
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Post#2 » Thu Mar 18, 2004 6:59 pm

Nice poem, Ellacriss.

to live their life in a normal way
is a wonderful feeling to feel all day

I like those last lines, there is something comforting in having life return to normal and it is a wonderful feeling. :)

LadyFeawen
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Post#3 » Thu Mar 18, 2004 8:12 pm

A very mesmeric poem, Ellacris. :)
I was born to catch dragons in their dens
And pick flowers
To tell tales and laugh away the morning
To drift and dream like a lazy stream
And walk barefoot across sunshine days.

ellacriss
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Post#4 » Fri Mar 19, 2004 5:52 pm

thank you! ive never really written a poem that deep, and im really proud of it. thank you so much. no ones really ever said that about any of my poems, they were all really dumb until this one

loni
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Post#5 » Fri Mar 19, 2004 6:09 pm

Ellcriss, you're new! Only two posts. You're suuuch a good poet. But when was Aragorn thinking that Arwen was going over the sea?

ellacriss
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Post#6 » Sun Mar 21, 2004 2:36 pm

she was in the process of going over, sort of like---well, she was about to

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rednell
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Post#7 » Sun Mar 21, 2004 3:53 pm

Ellacriss,
I think Loni is referring to the difference between the book version and the movie version.
In the movie, the director decided that an Arwen on her way to the Grey Havens added more drama but that is not the way Tolkien had written it. In the book. Arwen's mind was made up long before Aragorn left with the Fellowship and although this pained Elrond a great deal, he knew what her choice was.
Nonetheless, your poem is a lovely tribute to the movie version. :read:

ellacriss
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Post#8 » Sun Mar 21, 2004 4:21 pm

oh---ok. thanks Rednell. im not sure, i just kinda wrote it, but thanks

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bugyfeanor
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Post#9 » Mon Mar 22, 2004 4:33 pm

nice one, Ellacriss! keep them coming!
Evil may yet be good to have been ... and yet remain evil. (Silmarillion)

ellacriss
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Post#10 » Wed Mar 24, 2004 6:33 pm

thankyou! i really do like these forums....

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