Hum. acctually, a melody got stuck in my head as I was reading this. If I am allowed I would much like to put music to this song. I am not a that gifted musician, but I can play the piano somewhat and I can atleast write down the notes and the rythm.
It would be really cool if I got to do this, I can already hear the music, the drums that goes: "taram tam tam, taram tam tam, taram tam tam tam tam". The comp by a single flute and then the choir of men singing it.
Ah, maybe it's not that good, I don't know. It's your opinion that matters, since it's your poem, but I'd sure like to try!
"Always forgive your enemies; nothing annoys them so much."