Ongoing story

LadyFeawen
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Ongoing story

Post#1 » Thu Feb 19, 2004 3:44 pm

Is there any reason we must mention "Asnia" in each and every post?
I was born to catch dragons in their dens
And pick flowers
To tell tales and laugh away the morning
To drift and dream like a lazy stream
And walk barefoot across sunshine days.

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Allyssa
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Ongoing story

Post#2 » Fri Feb 20, 2004 4:03 am

...an enomous black wolf leapt over it, landing with fangs bared in the exact spot Asnia had just been standing in. The creature's hackles raised and saliva dripped from it's cavernous mouth. But instead of attacking, to Asnia's surprise, it began to speak...

(how's that?) :elfbiggrin:
"May the Angels Guide"

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Nilgaerien
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Post#4 » Thu Feb 26, 2004 12:44 pm

Dissolved into the air, leaving Asnia to stare in shock at the empty space in front of her and wonder at the sudden pull of her feet towards the river...

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Nilgaerien
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Post#7 » Sun Mar 07, 2004 9:45 am

...a water nymph rising out of the water a few feet away.

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lady erbalwen
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Post#8 » Mon Apr 05, 2004 11:55 am

"Help! You must help me, please!" Asnia was crying out to the nymph, but it seemed that the nymph couldn't hear her cries. As Asnia was about to give up another nymph came above the water just a few feet away from her. This time she yelled with everything within her, "Help me!!" She screamed. The nymph turned around and looked surprised to see Asnia there flooting in the water. The nymph, who was named Gilwen, swam over to her and started to speak like nothing was wrong, "Are you Human? What are you doing here? How did you get here?" the nymph stop a moment and looked at Asnia. Asnia was near tears, she tried to speak calmly to the nyph, "I, I need to get out of the water can you help me?" Gliwen looked puzzled "Why do you need to get out of the water its perfect today!? Not to cold and not to hot." Asnia was losing her strangth. And every time she tried to swim she would sink futher into the water.

(Sorry if I went over bored, but I was on a roll)
Namarie,
Lady Erbie

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Nilgaerien
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Post#9 » Mon Jun 28, 2004 1:32 pm

Hey everyone!! I posted this in the roleplaying, but got no bites whatsoever. Thought I'd try the hub where all the writers are. This ongoing story has a set of rules, though.

1. No more than 75 words.
2. You must mention Asnia at least once in your post.
3. You cannot contradict something someone else has written.
4. Leave it at a cliff-hanging spot.
5. Be creative!!! Be silly and stupid and go with it!!!


Asnia looked back again and again but still could see no one. Why was her neck hair prickling like that? The bow she carried was gripped tightly, her free hand twitching. All signs of her intution telling her something, but what? Her pointed ears flicked towards a sound in the brush. There! She crept to the low hedge just as....



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Nilgaerien
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Post#10 » Mon Jun 28, 2004 1:33 pm

Sorry - didn't clarify enough. You don't have to say her name each time, just make sure she's somewhere in the post. It just makes sure that the story stays focused on the main character and she isn't forgotten. That way, you're constantly having to think up something new that no one else has.



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