Rangers of the North - Murder in the Shire

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valedhelgwath
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Rangers of the North - Murder in the Shire

Post#1 » Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am

Pleased you liked it, Allyssa. I was a little worried about getting the twins right for you.
The only thing I am confused about is Yraen. What is his role exactly? I didn't quite make any connection.
Actually, in my haste to get the story finished and sent to you, I forgot to write the last paragraph. Yraen was kind of like the link pin holding the story together,
1) Showing to an everyday person what the life of a Ranger would be like,
2) Giving me the opportunity to bring in the conversation between the Bad Guys
3) Didn't highlight it, but Yraen would have alerted the twins about the Numenorian. I didn't want to highlight it because it would have ruined the suspence at the end.

But otherwise, make sure you read this story people! I am sure that before long we will see it in the Fan Writings section
Let me know when it's been passed by the panel and I'll post it.

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Allyssa
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Rangers of the North - Murder in the Shire

Post#2 » Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am

Could we have the last paragraph, Val? :D
"May the Angels Guide"

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valedhelgwath
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Rangers of the North - Murder in the Shire

Post#3 » Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am

Okay, Allyssa.
The missing paragraph has just been sent to yourself, Rednell and Mellie.

It had been planned for a while, I just forgot to write it.

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Allyssa
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Post#4 » Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am

Thanks Val. It finished off the story for me perfectly. The sons of Elrond are still acting like I would expect. :thumbup:
"May the Angels Guide"

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valedhelgwath
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Post#5 » Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am

I did actually concider sending you a spoof ending, Allyssa, in which their cross dressing would have totally ruined your impression of them. I just couldn't do it to you though :)

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Allyssa
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Post#6 » Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am

:hahaha: Plastic would have loved that!

But how could you actually tell, if we go by PJ's elves?
"May the Angels Guide"

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Post#7 » Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am

:hahaha: Plastic would have loved that!

But how could you actually tell, if we go by PJ's elves?

Plastic's gonna nick that. :D
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valedhelgwath
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Post#8 » Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am

Plastic's gonna nick that
He bloody well did as well. Funny story though Plastic. Gets my thumb up for being posted on the Fan Writing section.

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PlasticSquirrel
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Post#9 » Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am

Actually, my creepy versions were envisioned before I read your idea, I'm gonna turn them into cross dressers later on now...
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valedhelgwath
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Post#10 » Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am

Have the panel come to any decision on this one yet, Allyssa?

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