Actually, in my haste to get the story finished and sent to you, I forgot to write the last paragraph. Yraen was kind of like the link pin holding the story together,The only thing I am confused about is Yraen. What is his role exactly? I didn't quite make any connection.
1) Showing to an everyday person what the life of a Ranger would be like,
2) Giving me the opportunity to bring in the conversation between the Bad Guys
3) Didn't highlight it, but Yraen would have alerted the twins about the Numenorian. I didn't want to highlight it because it would have ruined the suspence at the end.
Let me know when it's been passed by the panel and I'll post it.But otherwise, make sure you read this story people! I am sure that before long we will see it in the Fan Writings section