a poem - feedback welcomed - thanks

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grondmaster
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a poem - feedback welcomed - thanks

Post#1 » Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am

I like your poem, and can taste sadness of the trees as the three hunters pass by the stand.

I have emailed my critique.
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Chathol-linn
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a poem - feedback welcomed - thanks

Post#2 » Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am

Thanks, Grondmaster. Your point on alliteration is well-taken! Best regards - Chathol-linn

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Allyssa
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a poem - feedback welcomed - thanks

Post#3 » Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am

*wipes a tear

That is beautiful, Chathol. I am no poet, so I will not be so bold as to criticise too closely.

I thought the mood and feel were very appropriate for ancient trees of Fangorn Forest, although I am a little surprised there is not more hostility towards the dwarf ;).

I enjoyed reading it, Chathol, and I do not normally enjoy poetry very much. I would love to read more, if there is any. :D
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