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Oerath Windsoul
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Post#401 » Sat May 28, 2011 4:20 am


I am sorry Fahvier, but I think that my next work will be something from between the light and the darkness.



I've a very good entitle and some speaking parts as ready.



This will be a sequel to: Dream is a path that you must walk.



I'll reveal two of my up-coming entitles:



'The Temple of Crystal Rain' and 'When she awakes from the eternal sleep'



Both of them will follow the story-line of 'Dream is a path that you must walk', and I'm going to tell more about the priest and her daughter, who tries to reach the form of infinity, so she could become a god.



So, stay tuned. :)



 



 

'Come explore the astral heights of the gallery of imagination and time.'

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Post#402 » Sat May 28, 2011 11:50 pm


Sorry I misunderstood you a bit Oerath, but still I eagerly wait for your next piece all the same:) 



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Post#403 » Sun May 29, 2011 9:47 am


It is quite a.thrill really to come on to the site weary, exhausted and then, behold, to see the do you have a poem thread up at the top. It is wonderful and refreshing, a little stop along with dusty path of life in which to stop and rest and be filled up with good things.



I am so very impressed with the power in all of your bodies of work. I loved certain words, they lashed out at my senses and made me think deeply with greater care than I normally would have reading along.



I like all of your imagery and yet each is so different than that of the others. I am constantly reminded of a costly and time consuming tapestry and each of you has skillfully woven your thoughts in awe inspiring colors and shades and tones , so that standing back and looking at the overall noone would think that the threads came from all over the place, a fragment here and there. No it is all so smooth and rich and satisfying. I know you are all so busy in your particular worlds but I want to thank each of you from the depths of this Elven heart for taking the time when you can to bless us here and give us much to think about as we move and live and go on.



And, please, do not worry nor feel bad or obligated in any way to come on here and post a poem . A poem is a very personal thing and not that easy, so be it once a month or once a year, it is even more important to come on to this thread to talk about poems and thought and just be together. The other will come in its given hour.



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Post#404 » Mon May 30, 2011 8:01 pm


This is obviously going to be a vast and intricate body of work, I enjoyed every word.



But we have a problem here Oerath, now what shall we do.



For this is a piece of prose and not poetry as such. This thread is poetry only.



So I am wondering if we should set up a thread for our particular kind of prose as well, epic prose of sorts as i realize there are other threads for prose. This way we could have the best of both worlds-poetry and prose to release our creative energies into . What do you think? Because, I feel sure Undale would want only poetry poetry on this thread. I need your input, all of your input. What say you?



Oh, and I CAN'T wait until the next installment. ;)



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leelee
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Post#405 » Mon May 30, 2011 8:02 pm


This is obviously going to be a vast and intricate body of work, I enjoyed every word.



But we have a problem here Oerath, now what shall we do.



For this is a piece of prose and not poetry as such. This thread is poetry only.



So I am wondering if we should set up a thread for our particular kind of prose as well, epic prose of sorts as i realize there are other threads for prose. This way we could have the best of both worlds-poetry and prose to release our creative energies into . What do you think? Because, I feel sure Undale would want only poetry poetry on this thread. I need your input, all of your input. What say you?



Oh, and I CAN'T wait until the next installment. ;)



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Oerath Windsoul
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Post#406 » Tue May 31, 2011 7:00 am


Thank you very much, and yeah, I didn't think so clearly when I decided to post it.



I can create a particular thread for it and for all of the other stories similar to what I'm writing right now.



It's going to be a vast project, but well, let's talk about this later in the evening, if you're just online. :)


'Come explore the astral heights of the gallery of imagination and time.'

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Oerath Windsoul
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Post#407 » Tue May 31, 2011 8:37 am


The first part of my story has been transferred to another thread with the same name. :)



If you're interested, read it, and remember to leave a comment! =)



- Oerath.


'Come explore the astral heights of the gallery of imagination and time.'

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Post#408 » Fri Jun 10, 2011 3:00 pm


When the sun descends beyond the skies



 



He mounted his silver horse, and rode into the east



through the nameless woods full of darkness and mist



Nothing could stand in his way, nothing could end his journey



One candle is enough to keep the evils of night at bay



 



He has sworn to protect his kingdom, the realm of nature's might



He's one with the daylight, he's one with the clouds and the sky



 



When the sun descends beyond the grey skies



When the strong winds and the storms will unite



There he rides on the back of his silver horse



Riding forth into the battle, in the name of the northern gods!



 



No hammer could bring him down, his spirit is unshakable and strong



his shield is his mind, something that cannot be destroyed or denied



His heart is wise and bold, and even though he may seem to be weary and old



The flame of eternity burns inside his heart, a flame that does not fade in the dark



 



When the sun descends beyond the grey skies



When his golden spear finds it's way through the shadows of night



There he rides on the back of his silver horse



Riding forth into the battle, for the glory of the northern gods!



 



You don't have to speak out his name, 'cause you know him by heart



He is the guardian of life, protector of mankind, he's fate is not to fall



On through the dark night he rides, searching for the sun and it's light



And when he finds what he's searching for..



The other guardians of this world will grant us a new dawn..



 



Written by: Otto 'Oerath' Timonen



 



It's quite cheesy, but I wrote it from the bottom of my heart!


'Come explore the astral heights of the gallery of imagination and time.'

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Post#409 » Fri Jun 10, 2011 8:39 pm


Not cheesy at all!!!



I think this is my favorite poem, to date.



I have never been able to wrap my head around poetry, so tend not to read much.  This thread has been changing my attitude as I am amazed at the talented poets who have contributed.



Thank-you for sharing your gift with us!



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Oerath Windsoul
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Post#410 » Sat Jun 11, 2011 5:46 am


Oh hullo there, Rednell. It's good to see you once again!



And I am glad you liked of it, 'cause it was written in a very, very short period of time, and I was even a bit drunk when I wrote it.



I felt that I should activate the poetic sections of my vast mind, so I did. :)


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