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leelee
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Post#451 » Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:28 pm


  Gimli's Lament



 



Come back my brothers, slain and lying quiet



to fill the halls under mountain once more.



In our great numbers we sang and we danced long



and rejoiced in the work of our sturdy strong hands



But now is all silent save the evil below



We delved too deep and we bathed in our pride ,yes



and to our grief a terrible consequence won



Oh kith and kin how my heart grieves.



 



Grieves for those days now not known



 



Come back wondrous lady of sweet golden silver



Whose eyes shine with the great light of Silmarillion true.



She loved me though dwarf kind, gentle was she



She touched my bruised heart in a mysterious way



Not even my dear mother could stir my heart so and



kindle flames of courage and hope like she



Oh come back hallowed Woman and with thy lips talk to me.



 



I sleep rather badly under the stars now



I dream of the Arkenstone , I dream of my home.



Yet wakening is dark too and I am so weary



of this life circle.



Perhaps it is time to look for the orcs that shattered the number



of kin and fight and then close my own eyes and meet again



the laughing eyes, hear merry words of welcome.



What ho here comes Legolas, dear friend, almost brother



and he calls to me and my heart lifts high and sings.



We are going on a journey and the Lady shall shall she greet us?



I shall laugh with my friend and in good time close these eyes and know



that Someone heard me. I am content.



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odette
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Post#452 » Wed Jul 27, 2011 4:26 am


Thanks so much Lady Alyss and Oerath,but I guess it was written a bit too hastily.



Oerath,you write so well.Just always feel motivated and keep writing.



And Leels.that was heartbreaking..I could feel so much pain and anguish,so brilliantly done.



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LadyAlyss
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Post#453 » Thu Jul 28, 2011 9:21 am


leelee, you have a most brilliant gift which touches hearts. it brings forth such sorrow...



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Post#454 » Thu Jul 28, 2011 9:22 am


brilliant as always oerathblush



fahvier
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Post#455 » Mon Aug 01, 2011 12:26 pm


I have not commented or posted any poetry as of late, but I have been reading others poetry posted here:) 



Here is something I have recently wrote; A little bit different, but is that not what we strive for? A little dark for my taste though.



 



Darkness:



 



The closer I look, the less I see.



The darkness, the darkness.



Its closing in; Slowly? No, quickly.



I am drowning in my own world that no one sees.



I am drowning in darkness.



I hear voices, screams; Far? No, close.



They are screaming at me.



Pain, Pain. 



I feel the hurt but can't tell where its from.



I strike out, and know its not right, 



but the more I fight, the more it hurts.



The louder I hear their screaming words.



But all is black.



I don't know what they say.



Who can I go to; To where can I flee?



But the voices, the voices; they follow me.



They follow the dark that it over me. 



Its too late now; it's over me.



 



 



Fahvier,



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LadyAlyss
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Post#456 » Tue Aug 02, 2011 8:09 am


Fahvier, your poem is brilliant, it shows so much!



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leelee
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Post#457 » Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:50 pm


Favhier I must agree, that was deep and it made my heart ache. Thank you Ladyalyss, I think I spelled it wrong and I can do nothing as for some reason for two weeks now my computer is frozen each time I come on Planet-Tolkien. It just says PT is not responding and I have to wait for up to half an hour to make a comment. it is exhausting.! I look forward in a way to the fall and the settling down of most of  us anyway so that once more our thread can sizzle with a myriad of posts.



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Oerath Windsoul
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Post#458 » Wed Aug 03, 2011 6:15 am


Very nice, very nice! I see familiar faces - The usual group of elves (or goblins? ;)



Good poetry, from both of you, Leelee and Fahvier. I've also worked on one poem by myself.



It won't be hard to guess the nature of that poem.



This is a tribute to Amnesia: The Dark Descent. I consider it the most scariest game ever made, and I fear it and love it at the same time. I took some in-game sentences and words from the notes/diary and flashbacks. I hope you all like of it.



 



Buried Secrets, Lost Memories



 



They hide behind the closed doors..



Oh shadows of night.. Silence the wind.. I don't want to step out of the light of moon..



We who dream of death in it's purest form..



Do not fear.. Do not shed a single tear.. You must bleed for the children of blood..



 



Come, The Spring of Lifeless And Grey Leaves..



Come, The Summer of Smoldering And Burning Trees..



Come, The Autumn of Eternal Dusk and Broken Dreams..



Come, The Winter of Unrelenting Coldness And Grief..



 



I don't think it's my time.. I am too afraid to cry.. My sanity is fading..



Empty dreams.. (haunting nightmares..) .. Breaking down the reality..



I can still hear her laughter in the empty rooms of this vast castle..



But she's not anywhere to be seen.. I've nothing but..



Buried secrets, and lost memories..



 



Redeem us both, save this corrupted soul..



My mind was too weak.. So I had to consume this drink..



Remember that I chose to forget, find strength and comfort in it..



Curse this night.. Curse this castle.. Curse this life..



I do not wish to die.. But I cannot carry on with my sins..



If I've to live a life of death and lies..



 



Written by: Otto 'Oerath' Timonen


'Come explore the astral heights of the gallery of imagination and time.'

fahvier
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Post#459 » Wed Aug 03, 2011 9:45 am


Thank you Leelee and LadyAlyss!!



Oerath, I very much enjoyed your poem, it was enough to send shivers down my back... But I enjoyed it all the same.



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LadyAlyss
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Post#460 » Thu Aug 04, 2011 11:16 am


brilliant poem oerath



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