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Nilgaerien
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Post#51 » Thu Mar 25, 2004 8:19 am

Thank you for reviving the thread! Very much like the word pictures, Arco. No suggestions - I like it just the way it is.

And I love yours, Lady Fea. Mind if I borrow it for a story I'm working on? Not to be posted here, of course, just for my own entertainment. ;)

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elanamirkad
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Post#52 » Wed Mar 31, 2004 12:10 pm

I have a poem, but i dont know if any of u will really like it. *sighs* but here i go....

The Lonely Traveler

I am but a lonely Traveler
No name, no address, no home.
I just am, I walk down all paths.

Some Paths are created by sins and regret,
causing me to stumble and become blind to all those around me.

Some Paths are created by justice and love,
trying to help me live a better life than the one I am living.

But I am weary and life seems unchanging.
Each day is a struggle of will to survive.
I don't know where to go or who to trust.
But if you see me passing by, please be kind.
I am just a lonely Traveler.


Hello to everyone and I hope I can get to know everyone here. I already had some people welcome me here.

LadyFeawen
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Post#53 » Wed Mar 31, 2004 12:16 pm

Sure thing Nil :)
I was born to catch dragons in their dens
And pick flowers
To tell tales and laugh away the morning
To drift and dream like a lazy stream
And walk barefoot across sunshine days.

ainulindhe
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Post#54 » Wed Mar 31, 2004 10:44 pm

Elana-that is very good!I feel that way all too often...Here is a poem also,for all to (hopefully)enjoy-it is titled"Untitled #3".I am sorry if it isn't exactly in a certain rhythm...:As the chill air of darkness is dismissed and the apathy of the colorless night exiled,a vivid spectacle of extraordinary lucidity enters into the consciousness of the world.Shadows fleeing in desperation are replaced by a vigour and expectation.The creatures of obscurity go into repose,while the air smells sweetly of tulip and rose.Sickened by the illumination of the great yellow orb,the evil-hearted seek out the remnants of shadow to absorb.Yin becomes Yang,all is reversed and the millenia seem quickly traversed,as if one can witness the dawning of time,before words became language,before verse became rhyme.Renewal,expectancy,divinity,bestowal.Awakening of the pregnant fates,the new day comes in the form of dawn,given to those that retain their faith.Peircing beams of illumination sooth the souls of ones needing absolution.COME TO US,OH AURORA FAIR!That we may live free of despair!We praise you for your luminousity,and for your steadfast generousity.Dawn,aurora,sunrise,daybreak,blessed morning forever cherished.Forget not the morning,she does not forget you.Be glad to see her and that you have not perished.A new day is born. Sorry it's so long!!!!!!!!

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elanamirkad
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Post#55 » Thu Apr 01, 2004 6:18 am

Actaully, it was great, i liked that poem, or hymn as i believe u said. Its hard to actually show my poetry to my friends, they dont really understand but thanks for the encouragement!
Hello to everyone and I hope I can get to know everyone here. I already had some people welcome me here.

ainulindhe
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Post#56 » Thu Apr 01, 2004 5:39 pm

To be a poet is to be frequently misunderstood...thank you for your encouragement!Keep writing down your thoughts-look what it did for Professor Tolkien!

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icefangs
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Post#57 » Tue May 04, 2004 4:32 pm

Hey guys, Icey here, here's some of my many poems:

You are...

You are the object of my desire.
You are my flame, my heart's fire.
You my rock, my chain to solid ground.
You are my love, the one I want to be around.

You are the one I dream about.
You are the one I want all but out.
You are the smile that brightens my face.
You are my happiness in it's place.

You are the one, rushing through my mind.
You are the one in my heart I find.
You are the one for all I care.
You are the one, my breath, my air.

You are the one at which I'm never mad.
You are the one, when I see you I'm glad.
You are the one who brightens my day.
You are the one who keeps my sadness at bay.

by: carrie n. (Icefangs)
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Thinking...

I sit here, contemplating life
as the time crawls by like a person
who's had too much alcohol.
I sit here, waiting for something,
wondering if i should sit here at all.

Should I sit here still, while
the world passes by, or should
I go out, find an opportunity,
waiting only for my eyes.

I concentrate on this while
ignoring the world around me.
My friends, playing outside, full
of ideas and such. If I've
learned anything in life at all,
it's this: don't think too much.

by: carrie n.(Icefangs)
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Well, that's all I can find for now, and I enjoy constructivce criticsim.


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icefangs
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Post#58 » Mon Jun 14, 2004 3:42 pm

Will no one read my poems?!?!?!?! *sobbing* nobody loves me!!!!

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Etharion
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Post#59 » Mon Jun 14, 2004 4:09 pm

Not true. They are nice. I like the first one better. But i understand the second perfectly.

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icefangs
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Post#60 » Mon Jun 14, 2004 6:04 pm

thank you, thank you, here's some more:

[u]My Dream...[/u]

I tried my hardest
to make you forgive me.
I cried my hardest
to win your sympathy.
I missed your warmth
your eversweet touch.
I missed your voice
your unending lust.
I wanted you back
to feel you again.
I wished you'd forgive me
so my dream could begin.
I longed for you
to hold me tight.
I dreamt of you
all the long night.
You smiled at me today
with a goofy grin.
I have a strange feeling
my dream is about to begin.
by: carrie n. (icefangs)

>>~*~<<

[u]Times[/u]

The times we spent together
will stay locked away
tight in my heart
Until our forever starts.
I hope that you care
for those times as much as I,
because if you do not
I has all been a lie.
You hugged me and kissed me
during our precious times
please say you love me.
You're the reason to my rhyme.
Every day I'm with you
is like a lifetime
filled with happiness to the rim
I hope you will always stay mine.
You keep me company
all the times I am down
all the times I am sad
Because you, you keep my spellbound.
I smile when I see you
you smile back at me
the times we spend together
I hope they mean as much to you,
as they do to me.
by: carrie n. (icefangs)

>>~*~<<
I write like I've been in love, alas, I have not yet been blessed that way.





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