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rednell
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Post#501 » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:23 pm


Your creative mind never ceases to amaze me, Oerath!!  You are blessed with a very special gift. I, so, enjoy reading your prose and poetry.



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Post#502 » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:23 pm


Your creative mind never ceases to amaze me, Oerath!!  You are blessed with a very special gift. I, so, enjoy reading your prose and poetry.



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Oerath Windsoul
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Post#503 » Sun Oct 02, 2011 4:38 am


A Funeral Of Evening Rain







I still remember the day when you passed away..



And I still regret I wasn't there, when your soul broke and disappeared..



But I haven't ceased to love you, and as I close my old and weary eyes..



I can still hear.. the funeral chimes..







And as the night falls, I walk through the doors of my house



Darkness is the only thing that keeps me alive, it gives me hope, it makes me to smile



And even if I'd be lord of the golden stars, lord of the weeping sky, or lord of the blessed earth



I couldn't still do anything.. Because I know.. That nothing cannot bring you back from the realm of death..



 



'And so, I had to accept her death with bitter smile and heavy thoughts..'



 



And as I now leave these black roses on your grave..



I know that my love for you will change their color from black to red..



And even if I won't ever see you again, the memories of you will always live on inside my heart..



The sky is opening once more.. The moonlight will find it's way through those darkened clouds..



And so we all silence for a moment of sorrow and pain.. This is a funeral of evening rain..



 



Come, the shadows of night, you've to follow me..



I'm the spirit of time and eternity..



Even if I cannot bring her back, or give her a new life..



I still want to say goodbye to her for one last time..



 



There is nothing in this world left for me..



Only broken dreams and despairing grief..



And if you truly wish to honor her memory..



Then you'll all kneel beside me..



 



Speak out the words.. Let her hear your prayers..



She was a part of my own soul, but I believe that she's now something so much more..



She used to fight by my side, she always managed to heal all of my wounds and scars..



And even if she's now gone, I can still see myself holding her gentle and soft arms..



But I'm truly glad that she is now one with the moon and all of those golden stars..



 



And no power in this world could ever take away all of my memories and my love for her..



The funeral is over, but those black raven's will guard her tomb forever..



 



Written by: Otto 'Oerath' Timonen



 



PS. Thanks for your kind words, Rednell. :)


'Come explore the astral heights of the gallery of imagination and time.'

sprodo
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Post#504 » Mon Oct 03, 2011 2:31 am

Green grass hobbit hole. Hairy feet nasty troll. 6 meals a day and I'm ok. Hit the dragon when I get paid. Lazy hobbit having fun. Come say hello to sprodo mun.

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Post#505 » Wed Oct 05, 2011 9:53 am


Hehe, Sprodo, that was quite tricky, but well lined. And oh, welcome to PT. :)



Btw, folks, where are you all? These halls have been silent for so many days, if not for weeks, and I'm getting sick of this wine I'm drinking all the time, while I wait for ye others to come back for some poetry and bonfire singing. Please do so. ;)



Meanwhile, I've a grand story in progress. At one point, I created the lyric series 'Tales from the realm of secrets and legends', and I'm going to write the next five parts as a one whole lyric/story.



Longer parts than usually, and more storytelling and speaking parts etc.



I've set up an interesting entitle, which is:



'The Mirror of Serpent's Eyes'



It will consist of five parts (as I already said), and I think this will be something interesting.



So, follow the thread, and I'll try to keep you updated.



I'm also going to tend to some of my unfinished stuff later this month. :)


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sprodo
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Post#506 » Wed Oct 05, 2011 10:34 am


Oerath Windsoul, thanks.    Ive been getting impatient too. Its been some time since I have ben on a journey. I would like some visitors and mischief. I wonder if Gandalf is around. Maybe I will go to the Prancing Pony today to check out Buckland......



Mîm the Petty Dwarf
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Post#507 » Wed Oct 05, 2011 11:18 am


Don't bother, Sprodo. Gandalf is not there. I came the whole way to Buckland to see him and he is not here. The halls in Moria are empty and lonely too, so I went on a journey to the Shire.



 



 



 



 



 


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Post#508 » Wed Oct 05, 2011 11:37 am


well hello to everyone, it has indeed been quiet and i myself have been too, lots of brilliant thoughts going through my head kept me away but i'm back! welcome sprodono



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Post#509 » Wed Oct 05, 2011 1:18 pm


Thank you Lady Alyss. This place is nice.    Mim, have you heard any news of where Gandalf may be? Or any dark shadows to worry about?    I propose to all who wish to join, that we go on a journey somewhere?   I was thinking Minis Tirith?    Im open to other places too.   Its been a while since I left the Shire.   My feet are now getting ancy, and my mind restless.    Fresh air would do much good for my health.   ???



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Post#510 » Thu Oct 06, 2011 6:57 am


Yes, Minas Tirith sounds good. I have no idea where Gandalf could be. Last I heard he was in the Shire, but I proved that wrong. Maybe he is visiting Tom in the Old Forest. I know he talked about that last time I met him. We could take a trip there maybe?



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