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Post#901 » Sun Oct 14, 2012 1:10 pm


Hi Beredras,



I like your poetry because it's pretty simple, few words but can hold the whole idea. Even if you write about war (horrible thing), can we smile satisfied as at the end good has defeated evil.



Go on with your writing..


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Post#902 » Mon Oct 15, 2012 4:16 am

Sorry for the late reply Beredras. I didn't see your post until now. But...I like it. Simple but it says much. Please keep posting. Well done!
''Loyalty is the only moral instinct that can exist on the same plane as truth itself. They may clash, but one can never overcome the other without cost.''

Semper Fi ⚓ ∞

Namárië

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Post#903 » Tue Oct 16, 2012 4:13 pm

Thank you Arwen and Elberet for your fair words.

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Post#904 » Wed Oct 17, 2012 4:07 pm

Moria
I mine so steep
Men dare not go
Unsteady feet
Bring only woe

Stairs that now crumble
Hear a deep, low grumble
Blades at ready
Feet more steady

Swords shine in darkness
Breath's are heavy
Doom is at hand it's the final stand

Sorry about all the short poems I'm working on a bigger one :)

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Post#905 » Wed Oct 17, 2012 4:17 pm

Sorry about it being written in paragraph form but I wrote this on my smartphone thinking that it would be smart enough to not disregard the "return" key. I'll do my next one on the computer.

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Post#906 » Tue Oct 23, 2012 4:24 pm


It's so good to be back here. It truly is. I've missed ya all so much during these past 33 days. :)



I was supposed to keep break for about two months, but I just couldn't do it. To be honest, I haven't written that much during these past 33 days. I've been doing some careful plans, musically and poetically.



I've also written a complete lyric that will most likely serve as a song lyric + some shorties.



I've now a newly built drum set, which will allow me to play better than I could've ever played with my previous set-up. It's awesome. I've been practising some drum tracks and I feel that instead of recording for that finnish rock/schlager project, I'll re-record my already existing heavy/metal songs and add a few more to the pile. That will mean that in a few months, there'll be some new music from me. :)



Also, I've been singing this and that, and I will be covering most of Alestorm's first album: 'Captain Morgan's Revenge' at some point, when I've the time and the equipment to do so.



Lots of stuff to be done. My novella: 'Lord Saerloth Melrethis II' is progressing quite slowly. I've made a lot of mindnotes (don't get too confused), which means that I've been working on the text and the nature of it inside my head. It's all there, so I just have to put it into words. Tomorrow will be the perfect day to do it, so, with that out of the way, I should have the first 10 pages of Saerloth, just as I had planned.



Now, before my brain explodes, I'll give you all something that you - hopefully - have been waiting for. Something new from me!



And oh, welcome, Beredras. I've read your offerings. Short and simple, but well built. Your words are quite ordinary, but work well altogether. :)



A need to be free. A desire to end all slavery.



 



This day shall be victorious







Rise.. Unsheathe your sword

And use it.. To correct.. All that is corrupted and wrong

This time.. You won't be the servant.. You shall be the lord!

Tonight it all will change.. We've been waiting for this day for so long..



Tonight, the stars will come to our aid

Tonight, the moon will show us the right way

Tonight, all debts shall finally be paid

Tonight, we'll set a course towards a new and golden day!



So..



Rise up, and make a stand

Show them that you're not theirs to command

Not anymore..

Battle on, my brothers and sisters, you've to settle this score

And after the events of this day

All known singers of this world will sing about the day

When we decided to be free..

And this time.. For an eternity!

When we decided to put an end to all slavery

And break the cold chains of misery!



This day shall be glorious

Today we'll put an end to all violence and bloodshed

This day shall be victorious

Today all of our foes shall meet their end



And as the night finally falls.. So do the gates and the walls..

The moon hides behind the sky.. And then she starts to cry..

And as her cold tears keep hitting the bloody ground..

We kneel down to mourn those, who we lost in this war..

Those that shall never be revived or found..



And then we join our hands together and start to sing in the rain..

Let us sing a song for those, who were lost and slain..

And then we join our hands together, so we could feel each other's pain..

So that we could tell to ourselves that their death's were not in vain..



This day was indeed victorious..

But this day was not as joyful, as we had hoped..



'Silently they mourn.. Candles in their hands.. Black hoods concealing their faces.'







Written by: Otto 'Oerath Windsoul' Timonen


'Come explore the astral heights of the gallery of imagination and time.'

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Oerath Windsoul
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Post#907 » Tue Oct 23, 2012 4:41 pm


This short bunch of sentences will begin one of my upcoming songs. I don't know the meaning of the words, but it all sounded good, when I whispered it into a microphone and recorded it. :)



 



Where even angels fall like snowflakes down from the sky



Exists a place, where in time, all lesser beings of this world shall die



Where even the sun fears to come out from behind the clouds



Exists a place, where our minds were created by using only fear, hate and doubt



 



Written by: Otto 'Oerath Windsoul' Timonen


'Come explore the astral heights of the gallery of imagination and time.'

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Wenlesael Isil
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Post#908 » Tue Oct 23, 2012 8:37 pm


I read you poem out loud Oerath and I think it was brilliant. The best you've done yet. No joke.



Nice to have you back with us!



 



Wen



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Marghana
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Post#909 » Tue Oct 23, 2012 10:05 pm


Hi, Oerath!  Welcome back...  I'm glad you couldn't stay away the months and months you had said.



I wonder why your poems sound like music...



Be well, my friend.



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Post#910 » Wed Oct 24, 2012 1:25 am


Welcome back Oreath .love your poems it would be nice to listen to one of your songs someday



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