Thread: Grud - A day in the diary of an Orc
I think you should be careful with archaic words like "tarry" though. It is too pretty a word for an orc. I think orcs would "linger" or even "hang around". But I am just being picky.
I really enjoyed it. Very professional
Keep it up. MORE MORE!!!
Thanks for the link Val - I'm reading through them now... great stuff!
ps The Quest needs YOU!
Well, well, well !!
I would like to make a point of mentioning something that may seem a little trivial, but I noticed about half way through reading the story...
The font size!! Wow. Like I said, not until I was half way through did I realise that my eyes were still focussing! lol
Usually when you go to read a piece of text - it is in bog standard 12pt. Excellent!! It makes reading much easier and more comfortable on the eyes! I don't know whether you had planned it that way, Val, but SUPER!!! I have 20/20 vision, but I'm sure as others read this they will agree - even having perfect eyesight - bigger text is much smoother!
Apart from that ... obviously... Story is fab. I honestly did NOT see it coming!
Thank you, Val, for sharing!
I'm pleased you liked it, by the way. Hopefully Taz will get the fan fiction section back on line soon, as I have a few newer stories that are not on my site (and I no longer have the software to update it).