I put my ideas in bold. Hope they help.
Quote:
We (a stock-taking)
We are borne without a past,
Into the kingdom of Manwe,
The path layed open; we had the choice.
The High-People,
The Men of Twilight,
The Wild-Men.
All of the same hand
All of the same kin,
All the same doom,
But different in many way's.
Wisdom, foresight and deep frendship,
Didn't reman the one,
To do,
What the others unconciously did.
Are We truly just the
Sickly,
Inscrutable,
Self- cursed?
Our past today,
It is the battle of yesterday.
Our future today,
It is a part of former years.
Find the kin of Men peace?
Have We,
The After-commers,
Learned to understand our doom?
Is it all over?
Or it this a beginning?
Is the lesson over?
And setting our mentors,
With faith in the ranger of the North,
Sail to the West?
What want you more than,
Kill deadly,
Succesfull dying? /Lucky dying? (not sure here. I don't think that death is ever lucky or successful)
Mountful dying?
Mountful living? (not sure what you mean here. What does mountful mean exactly?)
A deadly victory over the dead of many thousands?
Freedom?
Be Men?
We (a stock-taking)
We are borne without a past,
Into the kingdom of Manwe,
The path layed open; we had the choice.
The High-People,
The Men of Twilight,
The Wild-Men.
All of the same hand
All of the same kin,
All the same doom,
But different in many way's.
Wisdom, foresight and deep frendship,
Didn't reman the one,
To do,
What the others unconciously did.
Are We truly just the
Sickly,
Inscrutable,
Self- cursed?
Our past today,
It is the battle of yesterday.
Our future today,
It is a part of former years.
Find the kin of Men peace?
Have We,
The After-commers,
Learned to understand our doom?
Is it all over?
Or it this a beginning?
Is the lesson over?
And setting our mentors,
With faith in the ranger of the North,
Sail to the West?
What want you more than,
Kill deadly,
Succesfull dying? /Lucky dying? (not sure here. I don't think that death is ever lucky or successful)
Mountful dying?
Mountful living? (not sure what you mean here. What does mountful mean exactly?)
A deadly victory over the dead of many thousands?
Freedom?
Be Men?
I hope that is of some use, Neesa.