Where do we leave the stories we want to share, under this topic or at the Fan Writings?
Do we write our comments on the stories in this topic?
Or should we open a new topic for the comments on a different story (this would mean we would open a third topic here named 'Throwback' with all the comments on your story).
I will not start about BELGIUM again, don't worry.
We have been mailing about this story, but I will try to get this started.
I have a comment concerning the ending.
Like it is written now, I feel most of the tension is gone. Of course the reader still has some questions about Addaun's sister, who Gull exactly is or about all the books he has, but the climax has already gone. I think there is nothing wrong with that when this story is meant to exist alone, without any previous or following chapters. But if it is part of a bigger story, maybe you could add something (like peeking eyes or a sudden sound) that makes the reader curious about the next chapter.
This is only how I felt about it.
Anyone else has a comment?
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