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I wrote this for my girlfriend hope she likes it. what do you all think?

Forest Walk

Whilst walking in the forest,
He spied a maiden fair,
She turned around and noticed,
A warrior standing there,

She walked towards him slowly,
But much to his dismay,
He did not want to talk to her,
As he did not know what to say,

’Hello there mighty warrior,
Is it me you wish to see?’
’Yes I come here solely maiden,
To gaze on your beauty."