a poem - feedback welcomed - thanks

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Grondmaster
has made 25465 posts and is a Dwarf from Glittering Caves and has sailed into the West.
Posted Thursday 1st January 1970 (12:00am)

I like your poem, and can taste sadness of the trees as the three hunters pass by the stand.

I have emailed my critique.

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Chathol-linn
has made 72 posts and is an Elf from Rivendell and is not online.
Posted Thursday 1st January 1970 (12:00am)

Thanks, Grondmaster. Your point on alliteration is well-taken! Best regards - Chathol-linn

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Allyssa
has made 1657 posts and is an Elf from Rivendell and is not online.
Posted Thursday 1st January 1970 (12:00am)

*wipes a tear

That is beautiful, Chathol. I am no poet, so I will not be so bold as to criticise too closely.

I thought the mood and feel were very appropriate for ancient trees of Fangorn Forest, although I am a little surprised there is not more hostility towards the dwarf Wink Smilie

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I enjoyed reading it, Chathol, and I do not normally enjoy poetry very much. I would love to read more, if there is any. Big Smile Smilie

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