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I like your poem, and can taste sadness of the trees as the three hunters pass by the stand.

I have emailed my critique.
Thanks, Grondmaster. Your point on alliteration is well-taken! Best regards - Chathol-linn
*wipes a tear

That is beautiful, Chathol. I am no poet, so I will not be so bold as to criticise too closely.

I thought the mood and feel were very appropriate for ancient trees of Fangorn Forest, although I am a little surprised there is not more hostility towards the dwarf Wink Smilie.

I enjoyed reading it, Chathol, and I do not normally enjoy poetry very much. I would love to read more, if there is any. Big Smile Smilie